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Had a dream the other night
scared myself into a fright

Rung a rubber chicken's neck
plucked it's feathers-What the heck?

Tried to chew that rubber chicken
stretched then snapped, not fingerlickin'

Tasted worse than some old goat
Chicken bone caught in my throat



PS Chicken lips-chicken lips
eat too many -get big hips

------
Kacee Huggs


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The following comments are for "HEIMLICH...PLEASE!"
by Nitz Kitty

from fingerlickin'
to Heimlichin' ... got the feeling this was a real dream, has that absurdist but slightly creepy quality to it... missed ye, Kacee.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: April 15, 2008 )

baked, not fried
I prefer the cheaper cuts, like baken chicken faces.

bw

( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: April 23, 2008 )





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