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I walked down a daydreaming street that believed its pedestrians to be real,
the rain fell from the pavement passing through the absent-minded bees
researching immortality,they exchanged their secrets for one of my dreams.

I toured the universe in a hurricane,
found a crucifix on the moon,
heard the earths music make
angels bleed music in their dreams,
and woke up in a desert with two suns shining.

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whoever you are come forth these are the days that must happen to you.


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The following comments are for "streets"
by icemoon

"found a crucifix on the moon"
something very bleak about that, faith in a vacuum... like the detached quality to this… like an alien observation. nicely visioned.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: April 17, 2008 )

poewhit
I love the first line. Todays plastic IMAGE people, who shuffle or should I say, march down the streets.

( Posted by: poewhit [Member] On: April 18, 2008 )





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