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The tattooed clock on my back is ticking,
the glass baby inside me is ticking,
the wind helps me give birth
to this exotic child of a different earth.

whoever you are come forth these are the days that must happen to you.

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by icemoon

Glass Baby
Gorgeous sentiment. It's very simple and very good display of self-awareness. If only we would all, "..give birth to this exotic child of a different earth..."

I love imagining the "..different earth..."

Well put,

( Posted by: TAMMYHENDRIX [Member] On: April 16, 2008 )

hi tammy thanks for your comments

( Posted by: icemoon [Member] On: April 16, 2008 )

This is very interesting. Engaging. Doesn't give much direction, and in so doing provokes a broader scope of thought and introspection.

Nicely done.

( Posted by: chinadoll [Member] On: April 17, 2008 )

Interesting poem with a modern beat of todays plodding life ways.

( Posted by: poewhit [Member] On: April 18, 2008 )

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