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GEE- friend I have this magnifying glass. Lets go into
the woods and look at the BUGS. UMP- the rock is
heavy. There it's over. GEE- take the glass and look
at those TINY BUGS.
HE-HE-HE- there really funny. Look at the BIG FAT BUG.
HAY!!!! you BIG FAT BUG. Get a stick friend., lets poke that BIG
FAT BUG. LOOK!!!!he's stimulated. Guess the FAT BUG doesnt
like the stick. Let me have the glass.
HO-HO-HO-HO- those really TINY BUGS. Poke them with the stick.
Look there running fast. HA-HA-HA-HA- that was a great goof.
Here want a puff. good stuff. Let's blow the smoke at the BUGS.
Made them run fast. Look at the silly bug with all those feet.
TEE-HEE- that BUGS hurt. Poke that BUG with the stick. OH-
poor BUG- defunct. Guess the stick was too much. Let me have the
glass, here have another puff. These BUGS look big., looking through the
glass. Hope the BUG didn't have a family.
GEE- all the BUGS are gone. Guess they don't like us. Where
did all the BUGS go ? Lets lift another rock.
HERE TAKE ANOTHER PUFF> LET ME HAVE THE GLASS.


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SCRATCHES ON THE PAGE,
MAKING NOISE


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The following comments are for "BIG BUGS GAME"
by poewhit

okay, you lost me
without wanting to appear dense, 'fraid you lost me here, poewhit. were the bugs even real or just in the minds of the protagonists? was this some kind of a drugs trip? what's the moral here... totally flummoxed.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: April 10, 2008 )

Big Bug Game
This to me appears to be a Sunday conversation and smoking the GOOD stuff while telling about the mean things they did on Saturday while smoking the GOOD stuff.

You should be ashamed of yourself! Now, puff puff, pass pass! Hey gimme that stick!

Just kidding. I don't do that stuff.

Mess with bugs that is,
Bad little poewhit.

Tammy

( Posted by: TAMMYHENDRIX [Member] On: April 10, 2008 )

poewhit in SMALL LETTERS?
Hey, I remember a couple of months back looking over the pages of lit.org comments and all I saw was big giant POEWHIT on every comment heading? I thought what the fuck? Just like this story strikes me with the same? What the fuck are you talking about? Very abstract, but why the small poewhit this time poewhit? Just curious.

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: April 16, 2008 )

small letters
i was mimicking the bugs. they are my good friends

( Posted by: poewhit [Member] On: April 17, 2008 )





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