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The photographic wind left my dream
it took my neighbour as its new theme,
it trapped him in a series
of images intimating his worst theories,
The images blurred into a film chapter
playing in a theatre,
the wind blew through the screen
reaching me in the seats
i became part of the films scene,
and turned into the chapter's streets
he walked the streets and ended
up in the theatre,
he glimpsed himself shouted
and turned off the films projector.

whoever you are come forth these are the days that must happen to you.

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The following comments are for "Photographs"
by icemoon

your on candid camera ...

enjoyed the ever-decreasing-circles quality of this, like a dream within a dream, or a mirror reflecting a mirror... kind of reminded me of a sequence from a David Lynch film, not any specific one, just has that woozy, slightly disorientating quality to it...

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: April 12, 2008 )

A superbly written poem with a Kodak Moment. The past is our history. We need history to deal with our current situation in life. Also, we need history
to deal with our future. We are nothing without history. The light from the stars at night unveil the chapters and history of mankind. We are just dust in the wind. Keep sharing

( Posted by: FireFly747 [Member] On: April 13, 2008 )

dream within a dream
hi a dream within a dream was precisely what i was tryiog to convey in here-you are very perceptive.

( Posted by: icemoon [Member] On: April 13, 2008 )

thank you everyone-eric???
thanks everyone who commented on my poem-eric you are being very cryptic-could you make more sense please-thanks

( Posted by: icemoon [Member] On: April 13, 2008 )

listen eric please do not patronise you are not deep ok-

( Posted by: icemoon [Member] On: April 13, 2008 )

hi eric i am going to register an officail complaint ok

( Posted by: icemoon [Member] On: April 13, 2008 )

hi eric i over reacted-my apologies-barry

( Posted by: icemoon [Member] On: April 14, 2008 )

my apologies
again eric my apologies-i had been out the pub-here in england when i came online that night-no hard feelings and best wishes-Barry

( Posted by: icemoon [Member] On: April 15, 2008 )

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