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This air around me
Nothing moving
This sun is burning
On me glistening
So I stand here and
Let the fire grow
And let the wind
Blow me up like fireworks

This daily desert
Pressing onward
And I can't remember
Your last words
The last I heard for
Millions of hours
But I felt inside that
I was like fireworks

So here we are
Our last hour
Enough time to say bye
Until we shower
In sand and dust
Like our controls
Our mechanics rust
Like our fireworks
To skies we must

This daily desert's
Conquered all us
We wave goodbye and
Blow up like fireworks

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I am life as we know it. I have no use for a name. I am a reject, all and all, I am a reject.


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