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The Wind Finds It's Destination
by Tammy Hendrix

A hardened, slouched, weak, nearly deaf and blind man sits on a bench reflecting on the weight he bares for the price he's paid for his relatives, relatives, relatives. So many years of his youth spent fighting not only for his but the rights of his brethren. And now aged and weathered his heart is breaking for he sits upon the bench alone...The wind finds it's destination...and with a warm, gentle, loving kiss on his wrinkled forehead, he feels a message from his mother..."You've done a good job son. It's time to come home"...the old man smiles as his heart gently rests.

A newly born sprout stands proud and strong, firmly rooted in the earth...The wind finds it's destination...gloriously inspired-the sprout, with one grand morning stretch, flourishes his first branches.

An enormous, thick haired, shaggy dog spends his days chasing his boy through the house and outside around the yard. And with a bonnet, scarf and a dress on , he plays dress-up with his girl, while with caution, and a loving tug, he keeps his baby safe from the dangers of a boundless curiosity. Exhausted, panting heavily and overwhelmed by a very busy job, he drops to the ground...The wind finds it's destination...it rushes a mighty sweep of cool air through his thick, hot hair...suddenly he is rejuvenated and springs to his paws. Well rested he gladly assumes his duties to the family he loves so much.

A woman, content and meek against the world is devoted and aware of the breath that gives her life. She peacefully works cleaning and planting flowers around the town tribute of stone to the ones who protect and serve-near and far...The wind finds it destination...and gracefully communicates, "I love you." The faithful woman, already kneeling, ceases her work for one glorious moment, raises her eyes to the heavens and with overflowing love silently responds, "I love you too."

A man waits patiently for the elevator to descend to the lobby floor. His weary mind contemplates his nightly ritual. He's lonely and although he is grateful, he is tired of being alone and having only his dog to go home to. The elevator doors open on the second floor. A woman enters the elevator already filled with people. Her body lightly brushes against his body causing a sudden glance that sparked something undeniable in both of them.
Both still seeking glances, exit the elevator and walk slowly towards the the lobby doors. They cannot seem to take their eyes off each other. Something overwhelming is building up inside them. Directly behind her at the door, the gentleman opens the door for the lady. As they both stepped from the confinements of their daily lives out into the magnificently brilliant, freedom that awaits them outside....The wind finds it's destination... and with a slight rush of encouragement the wind sweeps her into his arms...denial is no more. That first "accidental" touch filled them both with a passion that could no longer be ignored...in private they take pleasure in the gift of the dance of the souls. Afterwards, with a smile on their faces that could not be contained, they kiss and respectfully say their goodbyes.

In a hot, dry, ravaged land food and water are nearly void. Life is not far from extinction...The wind finds it's destination...it warns an innocent with the scent of a predator. Dashing off to seek protection, the innocent is unwittingly guided towards a lake gorged with water. The doe quenches her thirst and quickly learns to become...a fisherman.

The babe rests safely, peacefully in the cradle of his mother's arms. He receives nourishment from the bosom of love...The wind finds it's destination..causing babies first gasp evolving into babies first laugh.

An adventurous yellow leaf, abandoning the nest, lies in quiet desperation, stuck upon the roof...The wind finds it's destination...the brave leaf, catching a ride from the breeze, takes flight then swiftly and slowly floats down onto a wondrous new land...his adventure has begun.

Am immortal waits patiently for the mortal to become inspired...The wind finds it's destination...and as my body inhales deeply within, my soul.....?
Amen



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The following comments are for "The Wind Finds It's Destination"
by TAMMYHENDRIX

Breeze
This piece is sent to all who read it. And to everyone who does not........
when it's time to stop...inhale. God is sending you a message. "Love is within you at this very moment-inhale, then exhale onto all"

God Bless
Much love for all mankind,
Tammy

( Posted by: TAMMYHENDRIX [Member] On: April 6, 2008 )

you know what, Tammy?
this narrative has a great rhythm to it that carries the reader along as on a breeze. think this might be good read out, good performance prose-poetry... the last paragraph is nice touch. thanks for sharing this, your most accomplished piece so far, I think...

and about what you were saying on a couple of the comments threads before: you have no need to be embarrassed or feel inferior; there are lots of different levels here and lots of different styles, we've all got different strengths and different weaknesses and none of us are perfect… I believe everybody here has something to teach and something to offer, sometimes that’s to do with the technical aspects of writing and reading poetry, and sometimes that’s about life and people… stay with us, and keep writing. best to you,

Shannon

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: April 7, 2008 )

Thank you Auld
You have been so kind to me and generous with your comments. That means alot, it really does. I suppose we all have those, " I feel inferior", days.
Apparently it was my turn. I'm not going anywhere. I have too many things I want to say to the world. Been silent for too long.

The last line I left blank so readers could fill it in for themselves.
Thanks for your comments again.
Do you really think this is my best?

Sincerely,
Tammy

( Posted by: TAMMYHENDRIX [Member] On: April 7, 2008 )

Tammy
this is certainly my favourite, so far. I think The Thwarted Will was perhaps a more involving/ engaging piece of writing, but I certainly ENJOYED this piece more :)

everyone has their favourites. very often I write something that I think is a pile of shite and people come back and comment and tell me its one of their favourites… It’s perplexing, but to each his/ her own, I guess…

and it’s no bother about the comments. I have no problem giving feedback to people who genuinely want to write and be part of a community, not just dump their work here and use the site for self-promotion purposes. THAT pisses me off, but everything else is fine, and I really admire the way you’ve been honest and open about your writing and about asking questions and advice. that’s what we’re here for! ;) …

oh aye, and you can call me Shannon, it you want.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: April 7, 2008 )

winded (in a good way)
This is beautiful. Has a calming effect that I wasn't expecting. It reads as if narrated by an angel. I suppose you can say the wind found me...

No one could ever have given this story life as you have. Amazing.

Don't bother with inferiority complex. Focus on writing and expanding your knowledge of the written word.

Haven't completely read "Eve..." but this is my favorite post so far.

( Posted by: desvelado [Member] On: April 11, 2008 )

winded (part deux)
Forgot to mention that I could see this as an inspirational coffee table type book. Narrated by an angel of course...

( Posted by: desvelado [Member] On: April 11, 2008 )

Winded
Now I'm winded. How sweet you are. Although I'm glad you weren't here to see my face turn red!

I wrote this about two weeks or so ago. It just poured right of me. It never ceases to amaze me when it happens. After it's out, I read it and am shocked and question "where did that come from? Did I write that?" Quite the experience.

Eve's a long one isn't it? The ending came out first and then the rest of the story built onto that.

I truly believe these writings are are only of my hand but are inspired by God.

Yea, I hear voices! Just kidding!

I'm on live journal now. I'm using that site for my actual journaling, some poetry and just simple thoughts that come to mind. Now people are going to find out how crazy I really am! (ha,ha)

Gonna be posting on lit soon. Have opened other sites. Exposure ya know. Am doing some work on those.

Hey, I found a site from Amazon that lets you self-publish with no up-front cost and of course they earn a percentage. They create the book according to the author's specifications. Heard anything good/bad about this?

Francisco, thank you for the sweet words. Embarrassing but it felt good.

Tammy

( Posted by: TAMMYHENDRIX [Member] On: April 11, 2008 )





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