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by Bobby7L (Member) - published: March 23, 2008
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Category - Poetry
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before dreams broke clouds
mid confetti and conflict
after trees felt words



03.21.08

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ghost voiceprints




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by Bobby7L

when in doubt
This poem reminded of walks I used to take with my little sister when she was 5 or 6. I used to tell her to listen to trees because they could speak. And, strangely enough, they would usually creak and groan when we touched them.

I know that's not what this poem's about but felt like sharing that.

What I get from this - and am probably wrong - is a feeling of incompleteness. That the world is not the magical place it once was.

But I am subjective.

Still enjoyed it and will have to read several times.

( Posted by: desvelado [Member] On: March 23, 2008 )

desvelado/ perhaps..
..answering a question: "Did you ever love me?", or: "Did that really happen?"..or..

thanks for input/your take..

RW

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: March 24, 2008 )





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