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I've been hit up by so many people for my "personal process to writing fiction" - from fellow authors to my sons sixth grade language arts teacher. I fear I often disappoint, but I have to point out the operative word 'personal' in the request.
So, here is my lack-luster, works-for-me process:

1. I do not recommend creative writing courses (gasp!) as they kill your imagination. This isn't just MY opinion - I got validation from a lecture transcript by a very well-known author, to which I silently cheered, as I've never seen the inside of a lit prof's inner sanctum.

2. If you are an avid reader, then you inherently know how to put a story together. If not, then go read no less then a dozen fiction tales and pay attention.

3. The classical three-part structure is a sure deal. You must have all three acts and you must have conflict. NO CONFLICT = NO STORY. Period.

4. Here is where my opinion and published experience differ from most. Outlines/summaries are distractions...remember I said "my personal process". My first step is, I daydream. I might carry the daydream on for days and weeks and I am equipped 24/7 with voice recorder, pen and paper with which I jot down plot points, twists, interesting quips, dialog, scenes etc. When a scene is really vivid, I write it. I've written chapters backwards - I'll see the ending and have to work forward until I've got the entire scene.
NEVER FORCE IT TO WORK! NEVER FORCE A SEGWAY!
I know the general direction of the story by the time I type 'Chapter one' but as the story moves along, it might switch directions, which brings me to

5. Let the story tell itself. Honor that inner Muse and give them full rein - get out of your human 'but I was taught' brain and let the creation flow. Here is a good exercise (which is what "Haunted" was)
- find a quiet spot, your favorite place to write, whatever.
- put your fingers to the keyboard and close your eyes.
- DON'T THINK, JUST WRITE! See what story wants to come out, what avenue wants to be explored. Don't worry about punctuation, spelling or grammar. This is an exercise remember, not being graded on it.
- the point to this is to let your intuitive creation flow - tap into that muse (and be sure to thank and honor it).

6. Characters. You give me a shallow character to read and I'll round file it without apologies. Pretend your God - because essentially you are, and create the character with scope...what is his/her mother like, where did their father grow up? What kind of student were they - did they grow up with pets? None of those points may be a part of the story, but it gives your characters DEPTH. I don't only what to know if they got fired from their job that morning, I want to know if it triggers an emotion from their past, what their dead uncle Jeb might say .... I think you get the point. The deeper and rounder you make your characters, the more they are going to MAKE the story.

7. The old adage "show, don't tell" couldn't be truer. If you have to take a writing course, then feel free to leave after the prof says these words - it's all you need to know. And don't give me flowery prose to do so - don't break the spine of your thesaurus to show me...use what God gave you - your senses. When your character walks into a room, what do they see, feel, smell, hear - or empathically feel - ah-ha the illusive sixth sense! This one might not work with every story, but when it does, it's golden. When confronted by the Tiger, how does the body react? When they smell the scent of roses, what emotion does it trigger? Why? How does the body respond beyond crying (or laughing or whatever)? The best works I've read not only tell me a good tale, but let me BE there with the character. I want to cry when they cry, I want to feel that tight pit in my stomach when they watch the dog get shot - okay, you get it.

8. My personal thing: Grab me by the first sentence of chapter one. It doesn't have to be a thriller or crime genre to do this.

9. When it comes to writing sex or violence scenes, less is always more. And sex or violence just for the heck of it reeks of amateur. Make it pivotal to your character or your scene, but don't over use it. If you couple the 'less is more' with the senses - you can create a scene that will make readers call lovers home early...

10. WRITE THE STORY YOU'D WANT TO READ. Period.

Of course, this is all relative. It's what works for ME, pick and choose what works for you. And then next time you read a piece of fiction, pay attention to the parts you really like and the parts you don't - and realize why.

Now go write!




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The following comments are for "The process"
by Dani

process
All good points.

I haven't written a novel but "haven't" is not never. Have ideas but they have yet to gel. I tend to stick to poetry because it is what flows through me 24 hours a day. Well, most days anyway...

Good to have someone published share their thoughts on the process. A lot of writers I've met refuse to help because they feel threatened. But they must have gotten help themselves at one point. Think they forget that when they reach their goals.

Thank you for sharing of yourself.

( Posted by: desvelado [Member] On: March 21, 2008 )

good karma
thanks Dani, it's always good to hear another perspective/ approach to writing. partly because quite often there are aspects I feel I could incorporate in to my own hackneyed arse and elbows process, and partly, I suspect, because I'm incurably nosey… when it comes to writers and their relationship with their craft at any rate…

thanks for sharing this. the good karma is yours. best to you.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: March 21, 2008 )

Course work sometimes
Dani,

I agree with your points and all are valid. I would just add that if a person chooses to take a literary course make sure it is one that requires a lot of reading, analyzing, and critique writing. I took a very good course through University of Maryland several years ago during which we read, and read, and read even more -- then we put our minds to it and attempted to disect what we read. Never once did the prof tell us how we should write, instead she had us think about how other "successful" writers apply the essential elements of writing.

I do agree that if a prof starts down the path of "how to write" instruction then your money is wasted.

Good thoughts,
Thanks

BW

( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: March 21, 2008 )

WORD PROCESSOR
My advice...grab em by the throat and dont let go till worship is understood...or that other stuff you said is good too...

( Posted by: kilgoretrout [Member] On: March 21, 2008 )





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