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OPPRESSION
by R.K.Singh (Member) - published: March 21, 2008
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Category - Haiku
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When I roll within
veins crackle like dried wood
breathing is oppressed
I can't leave the four walls
to survive midnight attack


--R.K.SINGH




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R K Singh


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by R.K.Singh

Fairplay


When I roll within (very very little lately) I would have been drunk....not sure about leaving the four walls of the bar either to face my ex's midnight verbal attack.

Breathing would have been opressed because I am sure she would have liked to stangle me....

I am joking I am sure you are not a drunk......

Eric

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: March 21, 2008 )

POEWHIT
The ultimate state, those four walls. Yet, it can be an oasis away from the world. As GOD states we should shun the world. It is only transitory.

( Posted by: poewhit [Member] On: March 22, 2008 )





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