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I have a strange feeling,
That this is not where i belong,
I'm always the odd man out,
Even when it is just me and one other.

Looks like the lonely road,
Has always been my home,
When did my passion die?
It seems to have silently faded away,

Hope has long been dead too,
Goals and dreams ceased to be,
Time to walk down the road again,
As a lonely old shadow.

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We adore chaos because we love to produce order.

"Death is light as a feather, duty heavier than a mountain."
Lan

"The best plan lasts until the first arrow leaves the bow."
Matrim Cauthon



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by Maneskinn

lonely old shadow
Life does go on, no matter what happens. Just smile, for distractions only last a while. Nothing else to do but carry on, and if im able, ill be around for a long time.

( Posted by: Maneskinn [Member] On: March 21, 2008 )

Lonely
The greatest obstacle that I will ever face is myself. It seems like time and time again, I have choosen the lonely path.

( Posted by: Maneskinn [Member] On: March 24, 2008 )





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