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A tombstone stands with grace
amidst the others in its company.
An angel stands above one stone,
a cross on one, another an American flag.
All mark those that have passed over.

When I die
perhaps a flower will be
on mine. A token or
memento to remind me
or others that perhaps nothing
is forgotten, only lost.


------
Allan Onik


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by Bradburyskin

POEWHIT
They only speak of death and cause. Yet, they will all return to dust, even the Pharaohs pyramid

( Posted by: poewhit [Member] On: March 22, 2008 )

Always wondering
I suppose it is a thing that humans do separately from other species; we wonder "what if" and "what could be". To wonder what one's epitaph should be as a means to leave some sort of image long after the final breath. I think it is the impression one makes during life that is most worth remembering.

Good thoughts

BW

( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: March 25, 2008 )





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