The following comments are for "Star" by Bradburyskin
I like the enigmatic and lambent resolution descriptives. I think those define very well how it is we view stars. I don't think the last stanza does the previous lines justice. It seems a little less poetic than what the final moment of a star should be. I wonder if you could word it in a slightly different way to lend a bit more mysticism to the bigger idea of starlight.