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I can't belive you'd do this to me
I really thought you cared
You were always there for me
When I was feeling lost or scared

I know you didn't want it like this
But I see no other reasonable way
You lied to me when I thought I could trust
There's nothing else for you to say

You knew how hard I could find things
From experiences I should of learnt
So when you came alone I finally thought
My luck was changing but now I've been burnt

You had so many chances to tell me
What was really going on
I know it's not all your fault
But acceptable excuses I find none

So this is my way of saying
Thankyou for being a good friend
But now you've ruined it, it's over
To you my broken heart I send

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