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You do not ask
the same questions as before.
They are all answered.
Where is the sky now?
It is part of you
as are the trees and the earth.
The cosmos and you are meshing
like a mix of atoms in a big bang.
And where is everyone else?
They are waiting. And they
are with you.


------
Allan Onik


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The following comments are for "After"
by Bradburyskin

Sky in the Pie


Cosmic...... Man

Eric

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: March 21, 2008 )





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