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Under the sun
by moroccanron (Member) - published: March 17, 2008
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Category - Poetry
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Time flies
But, I can't catch it!
But, when the world turns,
I stand still.

When the rain falls,
It soaks me all through my clothes,
But, I know that
When the sun rises,
I will have lived
To see tommorrow.

And that tommorrow,
Could bring me,
Joy or sorrow.
But, I must live my life like
There is so much left to be done,
Chasing all my dreams
Under the sun.

------
Ronald Peter Ciras


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by moroccanron

Dream Catcher
Hi Ron

The First Nation in Canada have the solution for you in the form of a "Dream Catcher"

The few occasions time has stood still for me ... I needed the extra time to asses a dodgy situation no spare time to contemplate my past life at that point.

Err have you tried an Unbrella....?

Eric

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: March 18, 2008 )





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