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Our Now
by Lapwing (Member) - published: March 17, 2008
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Category - Poetry
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Night runs
When you
In your glorious so
Sunshiny ways
Come home
To make our day arrive
With new joy,
New hope, new vision.
Tomorrow will come.
Our now is your gift!




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by Lapwing

Home Alone





Hi

I almost said it must be hard for her to sit at home waiting however it could be vice versa.

I always remember how good it felt to arrive home after a days work and dinner waiting to be served... luxury...

Must go got the washing up to do....

Eric

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: March 18, 2008 )

Bits and pieces
This reminds me of my earlier years as a husband, father, mechanic when I work odd hours and the only family time I remember having then was weekends. I felt like I missed a lot and the "now" was pretty much all I could count on sometimes -- tried to make the most of each "now".

BW

( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: March 19, 2008 )





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