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behind you and looking beyond
the horizon of your rising sun...

i am knocking at the threshold of your heart,
will i meet anybody at home...

i will be at the city-gate of your heart,
till this passing night transfigures into a dawn.



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The following comments are for "waiting for your love"
by poetdave

behind and beyond
this is beautiful poem because it ascribes to patience the importance, even sacredness, it deserves it matters of the heart. thank you for this and the timelessness it evokes/ invokes

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: March 11, 2008 )

wait no longer I am here!
is what I'd want to say if this were written for me...simply beautiful!

I like it, I like the way you you make it so to the point with love and care and a bit of mellow dramatics, its rich in content.

( Posted by: LMJ [Member] On: March 11, 2008 )

Very short and beautiful

( Posted by: poewhit [Member] On: March 12, 2008 )

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