The Road of Dreams
by FireFly747 (Member) - published: March 5, 2008
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Category - Poetry
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When we
Walk down
This road
Of dreams,
Every step
That we take
Is a possibility
Who shall pass the
Torch for the next dreamer

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The following comments are for "The Road of Dreams"
by FireFly747

dreams
Nice statement. Made me think dreams are linear.

You have an enviable way with words.

( Posted by: desvelado [Member] On: March 6, 2008 )

Like hypnosis
If you ever heard a hypnosis tape for relaxation, your poem reminds me exactly of that
same pace
same slow decent into subconciousness
... its like every sentence is a step that travels down into the land of dreams
by the last step you just wana close your eyes, fall asleep......
:)
but then you put the thrill back into it, with the mystery torch bearer. Nice.:)

( Posted by: shaza89 [Member] On: March 6, 2008 )

POEWHIT
I guess those dreams that become reality, are the pave stones of the path

( Posted by: poewhit [Member] On: March 6, 2008 )

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