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The snow was everywhere,
In my eyes,
In my hair.

It was everywhere
I walked.
It fell into my mouth,
As I talked.

Snow was covering
Just about everything,
And it was still
20 days til spring.

The winter is so cold,
It slows me down,
Makes me feel so old.

But, I have lived through this before,
And , hopefully,
I will many more
Winters in my life.

Because,
After winter,
There is spring,
The rebirth of my life
And there is a new awe of everything
That I touch and see.

I guess that
Old man winter just
Ain't as tough as me.

So I will just smile
And let,
What will be
Will be.

------
Ronald Peter Ciras


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The following comments are for "When winter never ends"
by moroccanron

POEWHIT
Nothing like spring, when the monkey juices start to flow again.

( Posted by: poewhit [Member] On: February 29, 2008 )





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