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Haven't you been watching?
Haven't you been around?
Can't you see what's happening?
I'm falling to the ground.

I'm screaming and I'm shouting
Trying to stay alive
I'm hurting and I'm crying
In my tears people can dive.

What's happening to my life?
Why don't you help me out?
You promised you'd protect me
I'm praying with a shout.

Free me from this ache
Set my soul to the Heavens
This life of mine is fake
Take it before I leave it.

If you don't put me at rest
With the power in your hand
I'll put myself to sleep
Deep down in the Golden Sand.

------
Who Are We If We Cannot Imagine Peace?


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The following comments are for "S.O.S."
by FishyPickles232

POEWHIT
These times bring on those lost feelings

( Posted by: poewhit [Member] On: February 29, 2008 )

Very satisfying.

Thank you for this-the yearning and angst are keenly felt throughout the reading. Much appreciate the simplicity and honesty. Namaste

( Posted by: satori [Member] On: February 29, 2008 )





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