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Lit Dot Org
by poeteye (Member) - published: February 24, 2008
Word Count: 14 Word Bytes: 96 Viewed: 164 times
Category - Haiku
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Thirty two viewed, but
No one posted a comment.
Something missed the mark.


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True style
is not a function of
financial circumstance.




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The following comments are for "Lit Dot Org"
by poeteye

Haiku .. bless you
sixty four eyes see
nothing is lost forever
silence is golden

( Posted by: Penelope [Member] On: February 27, 2008 )

Two lovely haikus followed by a stupid one.
Poeteye haiku
Penelope haiku too
Emlyn haiku BOOOO!

( Posted by: Emlyn [Member] On: February 27, 2008 )

Kind, lkthoughtful and concise
My shared language Friends,
Your response like the haiku
Expressed more than words.

( Posted by: poeteye [Member] On: February 27, 2008 )

Caught
attracted by this
like fish to a baited line
hook line and sinker

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: February 28, 2008 )





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