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I can remember the days in high school that were fun and uninhibitted. I can also
remember those people that were afraid to do anything-they lurched with their
hyena packs of scavengers like troll mice feeding on the Lords supper. Some had
money in their life already, and some were in prison doing time to make room for
"slaves", that were often picked out from yearbooks, or "backstabbing" family
members-or the doped, benign, bewlidered, and destitute ones. Innocent people with
talent-some social skills-but mostly willing in a "prison" environment, to do
"anything"-In the outside world, they are drugged to a point where they are totally dispondent of feelings for relations with opposite sex. Thus, making the
individual less likely to "take their life", if "set up" for a felonious crime
while in the cruel, insatiable hands of those "smiling" friends, from the new
neighborhood. Parents have used this device to gain control and notoriety and
possibly attain grace from peer pressure within the family ranks. Suffice to say
weaker individuals wether it be difficulty in a relationship, or lack of care
in daily routine-having excellent attributes, but lacking control of "self" due
to change in prescription medication or illicit use of drugs, or be it lack
of knowledge in "social transgressions"-familys can inpose upon each other
unvirtuous assaults with "rumours". Me and my fiance fell victim to this such
an incident, and with proof hard to dispell, I think this makes it one step
in the direction I want to go without the "tell-tale" scum I somehow thought at
one time were what they were. I am an artist, and she is a professional-In this
country I know there is a soul to empower each and every one of us-I hope the
races of people can bond within, and rely on natural ability to invent, and not
seek opportunity by "setting up" innocent men and women on felony crimes, to
be sold into the prison system as "bitches"-Let the prisons be filled with these
"people" that commit to such ludicrous and unbelievable profitting!




The following comments are for ""American Slave"-or innocent people set-up for money?"
by Wetice

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