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Piecing mysteries
Of an unnerving worldscape
Erosive and trodden

Lights have fallen
To cataplectic seizings
Ambushed by the mind

Spinorial unwind
Dissector of time
The outer eyes turn inward
To gaze upon the soul

Finding it all

Subliminal scavengings
Neural quakes
Slowly navigate this infinite psychosphere
No mistakes, no mistakes

Whats this about?
What is this about?
Whats this all about?

In your head
In your head
In your



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The following comments are for "An Active Pursuance, Acumanic"
by ghostpoisonsturgeon

Hey man u know why I like u??? Ill tell u why I like u...because u remind me of reading Philip K Dick while high in my footie pajamas and a bowl of fruity pebbles at my side...Just Like ur picture a science fiction Jim Morrison from 2012...enjoy ur stuff alot..peacccceeeee

( Posted by: kilgoretrout [Member] On: February 21, 2008 )

"unnerving worldscape"

love the incantatory, shamanic quality to this, and the stop-start quality, as if, after every revelation the consciousness is checking itself, is asking: did I really just hear/see/know/feel that? ... this is apocalyptic mysticism at its best... shot through with dystopian truth. enjoyed. sorry I missed it first time around.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: February 27, 2008 )

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