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I can see the side of silver
like a dimple on the moon
there's the simple side of wiser
while the bets are placed too soon.

A clear cacophony of the
people in your mind
Suing and they're screaming of the
Type that's not your kind.

We are all in this together
and together we're alone
while the people sit and watch and stare
the monsters trundle home.

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The following comments are for "Clear Sighted Blind Eye"
by senoritaburrito

cool
i like this poem, i especially like the lines "We are all in this together and together we're alone"

( Posted by: Isotone [Member] On: February 20, 2008 )





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