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Smooth little tight words
as bland as a marching band
running down the rows

Rows of black marchers
singing out their messages
Songs only I hear

But don't you know now
messages don't mean so much
as much as you think.



The following comments are for "Words"
by senoritaburrito

Nice Take
Good work. I see we bothe liked that "word" for a title.

( Posted by: chapter1 [Member] On: March 1, 2008 )

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