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I used to be so inspired by words, objects and events
But recently it's all so bland
Not one thing seems in my mind to make a dent

I sit and stare aimlessly at this almost blank screen
Wondering how it got this bad
surely you can't just loose that skill to dream?

Maybe it was the English lessons I've had to sit through
Brainwashing my mind
Making writing seem a chore I'm forced to do

It's not suprising really this could affect my skill
I was once so sure I had
Never realising it would be so easy to kill

So if you were wondering why i no longer write
It's because I simply can't
So this is my message to you, don't ever loose sight

Of that skill that is so precious to you all
from experience i know
how easy it is to loose and for you to fall


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The following comments are for "Lost"
by ~H~

~H~
So this is my message to you, don't ever loose sight

Of that skill that is so precious to you all
from experience I know
how easy it is to loose and for you to fall

True words of wisdom, here.
Well done!
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( Posted by: MM [Member] On: February 18, 2003 )





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