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something is on me
it pulls me tothis place
no matter how hard i try
i always come here to reside

i say i will not go there
but i still feel the pull
my feet move on their own
and now i am here

i cannot get away
even for just one day
this place is like a den
i guess i cant get away from it then

it has been overrun
and now there is no more moon or sun
just darkness consuming me
allowing me not to see

but still i come back
looking for some lost track
the rain washes away
all signs from that day

the memory of my feet
is bringing me back here
not allowing me to steer
neither to get some sleep

unlike the force of gravity
the pull has not gone on strike
from what i cansee
that is what they like

like a whisper in time
the pull leaves not a sign
now i cannot find
what brought me here this time

i didnt want things to end
but i saw the pull, pulling away

now something is pulling me
is it the some one
i hope it be
otherwise i am done

done with this place
done with this pull
now i feel like a fool
leaving without a trace

death will take me
when it is my time
but for now
death i shall disallow

We adore chaos because we love to produce order.

"Death is light as a feather, duty heavier than a mountain."

"The best plan lasts until the first arrow leaves the bow."
Matrim Cauthon

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