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the drops of honey
from the combs of your heights
make ripples on the pond of my heart...
and to the music of the ripples, i will always come

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Ibukun


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by poetdave

POEWHIT
Raindrops of love

( Posted by: poewhit [Member] On: February 13, 2008 )





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