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I feel like my world is falling apart,
Why do things always stay down and never start?
Sense of self has gone to the drain,
Time to embrace for a world of pain.

Things once seemed so right,
Now they left without a fight.
Flames that burned bright,
Now give off almost no light.

My fire is almost gone,
Where did I go wrong?

We adore chaos because we love to produce order.

"Death is light as a feather, duty heavier than a mountain."

"The best plan lasts until the first arrow leaves the bow."
Matrim Cauthon

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The following comments are for "Flickering Flame"
by Maneskinn

Didn't go wrong nowhere - just life

( Posted by: poewhit [Member] On: February 13, 2008 )

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