The following comments are for "Haiku 1" by Cybele
Succinct, to the point, and wonderful, depressing sense and truth.
Though, just a matter of form, I seem to recollect haikus don't have periods/full-stops at the end.
In fact, I think that'll allow the last thought to linger..especially in this poem.
Posted by: Furius [Member] On: February 13, 2003
Lost but loved it anyway.
I, for one, don't really know exactly what this poem is about, but it is a haiku that obviously has social meaning, and even "a feel." Better than I could eer do with them; probably my fault for always writing on inanimate subjects. Anyhow, I love the idea that I think is behind it, and the fact that I can actually say that this is a complete poem. Eight of ten.