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Young man's interest, hormone tingles
Felt the change, I might be able
All I got was a case of Shingles

Exercised to lose love handles
Had a chase round kitchen table
Young man's interest, hormone tingles

Planned a sit on sofa, have some cuddles
As we watched the tv cable
All I got was a case of Shingles

Wouldn't get naked, everything jiggles
This poem is not a made up fable
Young man's interest, hormone tingles

Young man's interest wanes, then fizzles
Online emails start to dwindle
All I got was a case of Shingles

Everything around me crumbles
Keeping warm with my faux Sable
Young man's interest, hormone tingles
All I got was a case of Shingles

------
Kacee Huggs


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The following comments are for "Tingles and Shingles Villanelle"
by nitz kitty

Tingles and Shingles alive, alive-oh!
ah, Kacee, so few young men live up to the tingling... or older men, for that matter...

witty and wry as all heck. you've a real talent for this, my friend.


( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: February 3, 2008 )

Oh Shannon
Thanks Shannon,
To tell you the truth, I haven't had much tingling in my life...I almost didn't know what it was when it happened...Of course that was because my hormones gave up the ghost long ago...All of a sudden one little hormone started tingling...I thought , maybe the testosterone isn't taking over after all (she rubs her upper lip and chin) Wrong again!!! But it's a start...Things were picking up in the cyber relationship and then he started taking blood pressure meds...not feeling right ....Dr. adjusts meds...His libido went kaput... (he was 20 years my junior) I was left with a case of Shingles...I think it was because my body chemistry started to change...If it keeps changing...I have no idea what I'll be turning into... I guess I'll have some where to write about it...on Lit...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: February 3, 2008 )

Whore moans...ahhh ohhhh
Thanks Lucie,
You are right ...about being safer on the internet...didn't even have cyber sex...I never allowed that either...just a little teasing...Shingles are not fun but I always seem to laugh at life no matter what is dealt me...Thanks for reading and commenting...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: February 4, 2008 )

Pen

Didn't mean to bring up bad memories...I noticed a rash on my ribs one Sunday...called the doctor on Monday and by Tuesday was taking meds...even though we caught it right away ...I was a mess for a month or more...It spread to my back and it felt like I had a tooth ache in my ribs...couldn't wear a bra...a prisoner in my own home...but that wasn't the worst thing I had ....Discoid Lupus Erythematosus (Sp) had that beat...Fought that for 6 years.

As far as the fellows go...they can all go... not interested anymore.. Thanks for your comment....Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: February 4, 2008 )

Tingles, Schmingles
F.
Thanks for your comment...no thanks to the Penicillin ...I'm allergic...I would rather tingle with someone I LOVE ... I'm not a stand in line gal for casual sex...I guess I'm a REALLY OLD FASHIONED GAL...I believe in marriage...Of course I would rather stick needles in my eyes than try that again...in that case I remain faithfully chaste...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: February 5, 2008 )

response to 'TASV'
nitz kitty,

Dead pan humour-- young man's hormones tingle. Lots of ideas with Tingles and Shingles. Shows up the nature of a villanelle form--- where more fluid and likely facile for FE to get to grips with while I read it rote.

firstedition

( Posted by: firstedition [Member] On: December 13, 2008 )

tingles and shingles...
Dead pan humour. Love it~

firstedition

( Posted by: firstedition [Member] On: December 13, 2008 )

That's an old one
Thanks for reading and your comments on my poem...Hope to get some inspiration soon and start writing again...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: December 13, 2008 )

Shingles
What dark fun. The terrible either/or is terrifying. Really, loving or shingles? Damn.

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: December 13, 2008 )

Shiny Penny
Thanks Jon...
Dark humor has always been the other side of this penny...I love making people laugh...but when I get ranty...I can spit plenty of nickles...thanks for reading and commenting...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: December 13, 2008 )





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