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Need to be alone entirely
may be I'll write and act what i feel

Free from judgment, guilt and hate, my own world.
My world
My hell and my heaven is inside these prison cells.
lock the key and release this energy.
Many things i wanted to do in my life time,
the progress has been stalled, never having any gas to begin
Left dry. empty and on E.
what would you do, and what would you say?
Annoyance in your voice.
i need time to be alone.
my sanity is behind compromised, bottling.
need a little time to our selves,
the only time is my dreams, while my ashes are turning
into a butterfly faster than light.
mother earth is ready for me early, shes calling.
time to go, this time is coming in a growth of a daisy.



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The following comments are for "dry"
by NucleusFire

dry lightning
Love the mad urgency in this "poem." It's more coherent than is obvious.

Love the ashes turning into butterflies.

Great read.

( Posted by: desvelado [Member] On: February 3, 2008 )

dry
Not dry at all. This was really good. Expresses my feelings recently better than i could ever say...

Really liked "My hell and my heaven is inside these prison cells.
lock the key and release this energy."
Expressive and emotional.
Awesome poem. Thanks.

( Posted by: senoritaburrito [Member] On: February 23, 2008 )





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