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--Bubbles up like bile--

It's there again reaching
from mental depths
wanting to make you scream
through another day.

But that isn't unique
happens to often
and nights are long
with a dim light
for company.

Just happens that there
aren't many things left
for it to get a hold of anymore.

And still it tries
but those sounds
hold less power today
and the inner quiet strengthens.





By: David E. Howerton




[08/20/2007]


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Coyote Laughs
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The following comments are for "Bubbles up like bile"
by bhagwandave

bile
Seems you're writing about frustration being ultimately reconciled with. It's a pointed poem that forced me to read several times. It could really be about many things but I like what I got out of it.

Enjoyable read.

( Posted by: desvelado [Member] On: February 3, 2008 )

desire
I got more desire out of it. More desire that makes you sick with wanting and deystroys everything. Agreed, and enjoyable read needing several look throughs.

( Posted by: thesadpoet [Member] On: February 7, 2008 )





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