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Old farts cutting Limburger Cheese
Black Widows spin delicate webs

The Internet's a Freaky Place

Con Artists perfecting their scams
Young, handsome, studs playing Old Maids

The Internet's a Freaky Place

Red Hot Mommas ice Daddy-os
Pedophiles counting piggy toes

The Internet's a Freaky Place

Fetish Freak makes toe jam sandwich
Sadist whips up tasty dessert

The Internet's a Freaky Place

Simple Simon bilked the Pie Man
Mother Goose tweaked Jack B. Nimble

The Internet's a Freaky Place



------
Kacee Huggs


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The following comments are for "The Internet's a Freaky Place (Dada)"
by Nitz Kitty

Freaky Dada
No Eric,
That's just on myspace...I heard in the news there were pedophiles and murderers and con artists that had myspace accounts...Then there are the nice grandmas like me... ...Don't kill the messenger...Just here to say ...there are good people and bad people everywhere ...even the internet... Maybe in your back yard....Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: January 22, 2008 )

Freaky Place
I know I haven't seen it all...Don't think I want to...The most terrible thing I have seen was the morgue pics of Elizabeth Short after she was tortured and cut in half...

This poem is to warn as alot of my other poems are ...to be careful if you decide to hook up with someone online...

Thanks for stopping by ...glad you got a laugh...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: January 22, 2008 )

freaky
freaky, indeed! and the rollickingly surreal language is the perfect compliment to this cautionary tale… mind you, “real” life can be just as freaky, and some people, myself included, are just freak-magnets.

thanks for this, Kacee, a serious message but told with flair, humour and your usual. Panache. take care.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: January 22, 2008 )

Freaky
You don't have to tell me about Freak Magnets...I was one before it was cool...Just like Country music...I'm like a refrigerator with magnets covering all my spare spaces...

You know me...I try to throw a bit of humor in a serious situation...thanks for stopping by and leaving an uplifting comment...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: January 22, 2008 )

Doubting Eric
Eric,
My ,doubting Thomas, friend...I already checked ...and there were pages and pages on google of murderers who had myspace accounts...I still think myspace is a wonderful place to meet interesting people...and you can block the ones you want to get rid of...I'm just saying never give anyone your private information ...even if they say they love you...There are predators all over the internet...just use common sense...I had a friend when I first went on myspace who got mixed up with a guy who turned out to be a Control Freak and jealously possessive...He bought her a ticket to come see him and spend a week...turned out he wasn't the nice guy she met online and he had her on his turf ...not safe! She ended coming home after 3 days ...and she was one of the lucky ones...

The only thing I take as gospel truth is The Bible...but of course you don't believe that either... no one can make you...I will not debate you...believe as you like...I will do the same...

The country I was referring to was Barbara Mandrell's song," I was Country When Country Wasn't Cool"...a humorous song...I can't stand Willie Nelson...but I do like Larry Gatlin and the Gatlin Bros..."All the Gold in California" is in a bank in Beverly Hills in somebody else's name...My luck...I dislike twangy Bluegrass almost as much as I hate RAP...It jangles my nerves...

As far as me being a Freak Magnet...Every bi-polar, paraniod , psycho freak I've ever met has tried to latch onto me...I'm not doing that anymore...there you have it...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: January 23, 2008 )

Freaky Sidewalks
Lucie...No place is safe any more...When I was a kid you knew all your neighbors...Not all good guys either...My girlfriend's dad sexually molested me from the ages 5-8...I tried to tell but no one believed me...Most of the time you could sleep with your doors unlocked...not now...
We don't even know who our neighbors are...Isn't it sad that you can't trust anyone now days? Thanks for your comment..Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: January 26, 2008 )

Dadaesque...
Haha! Thanks for a lighthearted dark side piece!

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: January 29, 2008 )

Dada
Thanks Lena,
It gets easier as I get older to write nonsense. I appreciate your comments...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: January 30, 2008 )





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