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I don't care
by thebeast (Member) - published: January 22, 2008
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Category - Poetry
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I don't care about
the colour of your hair
the length of your jeans
the kind of car you drive
the coolness of your cell phone
the friends that you have
the money you make
the food that you eat
the perfume that you wear
the stores that you shop
the house you live in
the computer you have
the church you attend
the job in which you work
the number of tattoos you have

...the nonsense things of your life.

But

I do care about
you



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The following comments are for "I don't care"
by thebeast

myspace survey?
that's what this list of don't cares reminds me of. the idea of those things being, I guess, to help you "know" somebody better... but it is, of course, all superfical/ cosmetic, it doesn't really tell you anything...

I like this 'cause it's got the savvy to distinguish the person from the packaging.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: January 23, 2008 )

the last line
was worth waiting for.

j.jd.

( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: January 23, 2008 )

Don't care
Yep.
Absolutely.
Impermanence shouldn't bring with it caring of any kind. We are infinite and transcend these nonsense poses.
Mind you, if you'd said "I don't care about the poetry you write", I would have to reply that I don't either because once it's written it flies on its own, but me and my poetry are like, well, a love-me-love-my-dog kind of deal...

Thanks for the choices you make in this listing.

( Posted by: windchime [Member] On: January 26, 2008 )





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