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You broke my heart
And kicked me down,
Twisted my neck
So I lay face down in the mud,
And left me there to rot.
But now you’re sorry,
So sorry you did this,
You say you were stupid
For leaving me.
I agree,
You were stupid,
But all I want
Is to lie in your arms again
Encompass me and what I am,
My soul and my being,
The two of us as we lay
Twisted and exhausted,
Just pull me close
And never let me go,
This is what I want,
What I crave,
What I dream about on cold nights
When I wake alone,
Shivering in the dark.
Just take back
Everything you and said and did
So we can live together in eternity.

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