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Sometimes I wonder
If the choices we make
Should be considered blunders
Or cause our hopes to break.
Does it really matter
What we set into motion?
Is it really better
To cause a commotion,
To fuss and complain,
And worry and moan?
To be always in pain,
To be scared and alone?

Sometimes I think:
If there’s someone I love,
Rather than blink
And he’s gone like a dove,
I should just grab on,
I should just trust,
While our love is still young,
Before it turns to dust.
I do not want to watch you go
Into the sunset, gone forever,
So allow me to show
I will leave you never.

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