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na na na na...

I left my troubles far away
I left my changes on the open road
and everything around me
nothing, nothing can replace you
nothing seems to change you
nothing can prepare you for this,
or prepare you for me

and if I fall again, and if I fall again
I now remember your ways, I still remember what you said

this is my way, this is my way
this is how I say, how I say, how I say
nothing can replace you
nothing ever changes me
me, me
we're all the same today,
we're all the same today,
we're all the same today,
we're all the same today


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The following comments are for "Early Dreamer"
by eleventeen

rhythm
i loved the rhythm of this piece, i loved the repetition because it really suited the subject matter and the cadence and rhythm of the piece such a simple statement, and moment, complex emotion but so well presented.

( Posted by: De`esse [Member] On: February 10, 2003 )

Wonderful
Eleventeen,

Nice lyrics I liked them a lot. I could almost feel the music that goes with them. It would be interesting to hear what kind of music you actually had in mind for them.:)

Later,
Dras

( Posted by: Drastine [Member] On: February 11, 2003 )

Thanks!
It's pretty cool to hear you all say that.
I almost don't want to admit to now, but I actually made up all those words on the spot while recording the music.

If you'd like to hear it, You can check it out @ http://jaspertine.zed.cbc.ca
look for a file called "Early Dreamer (demo)"

Please pay no mind to the poor recording quality and even worse vocal performance, as I said, it was all made up on the spot.

( Posted by: eleventeen [Member] On: February 22, 2003 )





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