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Yes, we gave love a chance,
Then, she whispered in my ear,
I gave her a reply
I remember, that you and I
Gave love a second chance



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The following comments are for "We Gave Love a Chance"
by FireFly747

Love





Love will always be my God
For I am no mans man you know
Give me a women anytime
Now that's the way to go.

My home is where I lay my hat
This line though I had to delete?
My life alone would only be half
Without a partner, not complete

Upwards onwards Christian Folk
Throughout life here’s what I found
Don’t lose sight of the Holy Grail
What comes round just goes around

Eric

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: January 16, 2008 )

Reply:Give Love a Chance
Thanks you for reading my poem and providing positive energy. Well, it is so amazing how similar
we are across the big pond, with our poetry expressions. Your poem titled, "Love" is a prefect fit and reflection, regarding "Giving Love a Chance"
So, keep telling truth, with paper and pen.

( Posted by: FireFly747 [Member] On: January 16, 2008 )





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