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Born into sin
And shaped by iniquity
I have sinned for many seasons
And cast my pearls before swine
Cursing my trespassers
I chase all temptation
Kicking and screaming
A delivery for evil
And die before waking
The naughty from the nice
A cloned insurrection
I'm the president of vice

Beware the lollipop of mediocrity-
Lick it once and you suck forever.

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The following comments are for "Gelasmorg's Transgression"
by metrozol

Wow. You sound like fun. Actually not too far from the way I feel right now. I very much like the line "A cloned insurrection".
Hope lies in the fact that you call this a "transgression" I guess-

Hope we're both in a better mood tomorrow-


( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: January 12, 2008 )

vice president
oh, this is good, so very, very good...

like how it inverts the Christian creed, warping and bending to its own end... and "president of vice" made me laugh out loud...

you're one smart cooking, love the forked-tongue-in-cheek darkness this conveys. good stuff.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: January 14, 2008 )

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