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Looks like Iím falling down again
Looks like Iíve tripped on my own feet
Looks like Iím fighting the world again
Looks like Iím fighting and I just canít compete

Iím not the man that I should be
Iím always falling apart and falling down
But take my hand and you will see
The best of you, the best of me
This is where weíre supposed to be

Looks like Iím breaking down again
I get myself so scared and dumb
The sin eater my whole life
But who will eat my sins when my time comes?
(I donít know)
But come on baby, take my hand
Let me guide you through this darkened place
I swear Iíll make you understand
Wonít bury my head in the sand
I couldnít see the light shine on your face

Iím not the man that I should be
Iím always falling apart and falling down
But take my hand and you will see
The best of you, the best of me
This is where weíre supposed to be

You and me, donít you see?
Donít throw away our history
This is where weíre supposed to be

Iím not the man that I should be
Iím always falling apart and falling down
But take my hand and you will see
The best of you, the best of me
This is where weíre supposed to be


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The following comments are for "Third Time Around"
by E.G. Evans

Thanks
Yes, I have written music to it. Truthfully, that's why I've been away so long, I've been working on recording. Honestly, it's just an acoustic demo of what is supposed to be a big rock song, but we all have to start somewhere. I have the song (as well as a few others) on my myspace page, which is www.myspace.com/jarodthomas.

( Posted by: E.G. Evans [Member] On: January 1, 2008 )





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