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you, gone!
me, alone....
how am i to carry on?
you, full of glee!
me, in misery....
us, where the sun shon!
you, happy!
me, blue....
tell me, what am i to do?
you, there!
me, still here....
it will be hard for me this year!

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The following comments are for "you and me... but not us!"
by man eating maniac

me think
You, write!
Me, cry!
why must you assault my eyes . . .

Sorry. I was just really put off by this poem, and I've quite liked some of your other work. The Tarzan and Jane thing just doesn't work for me.

( Posted by: Boy Howdy [Member] On: September 19, 2003 )

what else can i say, i think it is rubbish too, looking back on it!

( Posted by: man eating maniac [Member] On: September 19, 2003 )

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