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i saw you dancing for the sun and moon.
and i saw you dance for the sea.
there was a time you danced for freedom.

why don't you dance for me?


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The following comments are for "why don't you dance for me?"
by man eating maniac

Great!
Aloha,
This poem is simply wonderful.
I really enjoyed reading it and felt it kind of touched me.

C ya,
sinner.

( Posted by: sinner [Member] On: February 6, 2003 )

fantastic
I really enjoyed reading this, it is fantastic.

( Posted by: averagejoe [Member] On: February 7, 2003 )

lyrical
This has a delightful lyrical quality to it that gives it a sense of familiarity, even on the first reading... everything just seems right.

( Posted by: Spudley [Member] On: February 7, 2003 )

thank you everyone
your comments really mean a lot to me.

( Posted by: man eating maniac [Member] On: February 23, 2003 )

Jeez
I can't find any superlatives not already used. WOW, YUM, YUM YIPPEE - erm, it's time I went to bed.

( Posted by: ogg [Member] On: September 1, 2003 )





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