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why does it have to be?
loves unfair game reached me.
all the pain i felt before
dropped with my morals to the floor
but you say I can't keep you now
as you whisper you kiss my brow

these tears don't want to fall for you
this heart beats next to you
you hold me tight, and threaten to go away
yet in my heart you know you'll stay

why can't I make you see?
exactly what you mean to me
but with each touch the feelings change
swiftly, feircely rearrange
until the wind blows no more
you are the one i give my body for

This little thing came to me a few days too late...anyway I hope you all enjoy...


If I did it...I didn't mean to.
If I hurt you...I didn't mean to.
If I left you...I didn't mean to.
If I scared you...I didn't mean to.
If I loved you...I didn't mean to.

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