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damn this bad luck. i lost my front teeth & my girlfriend. i can't find my glasses. i think i'm in a honduran prison & i can't remember how i got here. it's gross. there's a blanket but things are crawling on it, but then again i'm very cold. i can hear a guy nearby snoring; i can hear another guy whimpering, sobbing. i don't know which is worse. i have to take a piss & i don't know where to go. i think they said there's a bucket. and why do i have a hard-on? i know why. takes your mind off things, thinking about sex. in real life, i have normal sex - oral, vaginal, missionary, sometimes girl-on-top. here i think about lesbians, anal intercourse, guys, anything. 10 minutes 10 times a day that i don't have to think about the other 23 hours or so. sleep is good. that knocks off another 5 hours more or so. that fucking blanket. they keep the lights on all the time, i tie my shirt around my head like a sleep mask, but then i'm cold. they laugh at me, they scoff, they call me an asshole and step on my bologna sandwich before they offer it to me. i do not eat bologna. i weigh 92 pounds. i stand 6 feet tall. i thought i was in honduras, but yesterday i heard one of the guards whisper - "gitmo". maybe i'm in cuba. what did i do? i can't find my glasses.


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by mercer102

i'm sorry
just re-reading this for the helluvit, and suddenly i can't help loving you. i know you're done with me, but you never even let me say goodbye. wish i could take you on a date.


( Posted by: mercer102 [Member] On: July 3, 2013 )

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