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Now the story's been retold
That the original fruit of temptation
Was really a pomegranate
No wonder sin was invented!
Who the Hell wants to deal
With all those seeds, God Dammit?

Beware the lollipop of mediocrity-
Lick it once and you suck forever.

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The following comments are for "I'm Penitent"
by metrozol

Awww, but they taste so good... raised a smile, did this, good to see a post from you again.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: December 18, 2007 )

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