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Once, I looked into a mirror in a tower and saw a baby dressed as a jester. I walked up some stairs and looked into another mirror. In this one I saw an old man humming daftly to himself. When I reached the top of the tower I noted a giant grasshopper signing a paper for me (at a golden desk). The paper read: “sign below for passage to next level.”

Allan Onik

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by Bradburyskin

I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. It is an imitation of Charles Simic's style of poety.

( Posted by: Bradburyskin [Member] On: December 11, 2007 )

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