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There's a sea of lost
minds and a better sway of
blue.
There's a deep of love left
for the deeper weight of
true.

There's a land of lost
memory and a better soil
of brown.
There are gardens of love left
for gardeners to keep
around.

There's a boat of
sail and space,
for two, to
venture forth...

...Here we are,
two and
tempted.

There it swells,
deeper, vaster
and endless.

Here we perpend and
bend ourselves to
wake.

We don't.

We dare.

We were.


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