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I want to pull you over my body


To get that silky feeling


Strongly craving the affection


Just from looking at you


Sliding you down and around my lushes body


Fitting my every sway as I walk


Embracing the desire you give to me


Increasing their appetite to hunger for you


How do you fit my hips so beautifully


Taking the blackness and surrounding


It with your intention to make me never take you off


Or is it me?


That showing you off?


With beautie


With desire


Loving the tightness


The glow


Feeling the tension in between us


Never raveling my numbness


You are my black love


The blackest that can walk in a room by


Embracing my every move


You express my shyest side


Strongly affecting everyone beside me


Their jealously form groups


Just to know how I got you


You might even take the credit


For showing my passionate side


You are my black love


So smooth around the depth of my emotions


To woo not just me but my dark side


You are my black love


my appetite is tire only to you


Until the next love of my life comes alone


------
Anna E M


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The following comments are for "My Black Love"
by QmayEliz

Hot!
Very sensual piece...Where is my fan...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: December 8, 2007 )

My Black Love
"Until the next love of my life comes alone"

fickle fickle fickle. Robert. ;)

( Posted by: robnjop [Member] On: December 8, 2007 )





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