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I want to pull you over my body

To get that silky feeling

Strongly craving the affection

Just from looking at you

Sliding you down and around my lushes body

Fitting my every sway as I walk

Embracing the desire you give to me

Increasing their appetite to hunger for you

How do you fit my hips so beautifully

Taking the blackness and surrounding

It with your intention to make me never take you off

Or is it me?

That showing you off?

With beautie

With desire

Loving the tightness

The glow

Feeling the tension in between us

Never raveling my numbness

You are my black love

The blackest that can walk in a room by

Embracing my every move

You express my shyest side

Strongly affecting everyone beside me

Their jealously form groups

Just to know how I got you

You might even take the credit

For showing my passionate side

You are my black love

So smooth around the depth of my emotions

To woo not just me but my dark side

You are my black love

my appetite is tire only to you

Until the next love of my life comes alone

Anna E M

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The following comments are for "My Black Love"
by QmayEliz

Very sensual piece...Where is my fan...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: December 8, 2007 )

My Black Love
"Until the next love of my life comes alone"

fickle fickle fickle. Robert. ;)

( Posted by: robnjop [Member] On: December 8, 2007 )

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